Blue and Gray I live in a house that is blue all but the gray of the windows and stare at the wrinkles from the frown upon your face to end it all or examine your brown pipe engraved with white swirls of porcupine or with two hands adjust the pillow behind your head -- the pillow that has slipped from its resting place even though your body has stopped breathing
Wanda M. Wandas's Questions:
1. Is the title misleading? Should it be more pertinent to the content?
2. Does the line break in the next to last line stop the poem's flow?
3. Does the tone seem happy, sad or melancholy?
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