Snake Charmer My father listens at the door below the floorboards knows what everyone says to each other He can guess the past predict the future live in all but the present take a walk in the woods with a forked stick to snag a snake crush its head flip it into the brook for the fishes If crossed he threatens to shoot himself never return from the forest
Wanda M. Wandas's Questions:
1. Which is the weakest stanza? Which the strongest? Why? In other words,
is the imagery strong for you?
2. Should there be more mystery, or is there enough to maintain interest?
3. Does the language of "predict the future" sound derived?
Thank You!