When I See... When I see your hair I want to smell all the places you have been When I see your feet I want to rub away the miles you have walked When I see your hands I want to wash off the hours they have strained When I see your eyes I want to protect them from all things evil and read the story they might tell
Kyle Anderson's Questions:
This is my first attempt at writing poetry.
I want to know if I have any of the good qualities a poem has?
If I repeat to much......because I think I have to much of a song influence......Is it any good??