FINALITY Akimbo, he stands alone looking by not directly at the spot. He looks into some unreachable cosmos into which only he is allowed. A desperate movement is made. Not by him, but the other. A hollow laugh jumps from the emptiness and he slowly begins to walk away. Once again there is some weak shuffling but he kicks the debris away with little effort. He is gone. From a secluded haven a child crawls toward the crumpled mass and silently says goodbye to his mother forever.
Susan B. Frischer's Questions:
1. Is the form that I am using acceptable?
2. Is the language which I use too simple?