Where? Somewhere along the way I was searching For love Family Life I lost my way along the slender walk Toppled down through briar bushes and thistles Cut my feet from the jagged stones Landed in the middle of nowhere and called it home But it is empty The word The place Me I want to go home but there is no such thing I love and receive hate I heal and receive pain I hurt and receive more and more The emptiness I feel will one day consume me I try to fight it off with fire, words and tears But it stalks like a wolf and encircles me Waiting for the right moment to strike I receive in abundance things I do not want The little things I wish for denied Somewhere along the way I searched But I never looked for me
Pheonix Gunn's Questions:
I was basically wanting to hear anyone's critisim about it as I have never asked anyone's opinion. I don't know a direct question to ask, except perhaps does it seem to point in the same direction or loose its focus somewhere in the middle?
Also what would you call the style? and does it sound like it carries real emotion or depth or more likely does it remind you of a depressive high school doodle?
Thank you for your time.