surya dev furnace eye in the chlorinated pool blue sky. hearth faraway for million chills. hell in some geography. anti-jaundice warmth on my baby's back; vitamin d in these tropic malnutrition. fallen a catalyst for handheld lovers. blindingly mighty. lord of the leash 9 courtiers and the x. rests in neptune's warm bed, rises from behind dried bars of starved brambles. and for all the arrogance obliterated by soft rain.
Pradeep N. Mane's Questions:
Q1. i wanted to write an easy fluffy poem. does it achieve that?
Q2. does it seem abrupt?
surya dev means sun (surya) god (dev)