Love Inversion The rainbow of our lives is all inversed. Your red is my violet Your orange is my blue Your yellow is my cyan And when you see chartreuse I swallow green. But when we look at happiness We both say 'red' And when the choler in our flesh Makes your embraces aching We both say 'violet'. You - human ocean, Throw your drops, Outside your senses' cage But never can I feel you drip Or flow into my rivage. When I say 'love' You startle orange When you say 'love' I'm drowned in blue... We act the same But feel so different The grain of sand, Without a name, Of white and black Which is our land.
Ciprian Pastinica's Questions:
I would like to know if the change of pace and the relative freedom of the rhyme looks all right