Love Inversion

The rainbow of our lives is all inversed.
Your red is my violet
Your orange is my blue
Your yellow is my cyan
And when you see chartreuse
I swallow green.
But when we look at happiness
We both say 'red'
And when the choler in our flesh
Makes your embraces aching
We both say 'violet'.

You - human ocean,
Throw your drops,
Outside your senses' cage
But never can I feel you drip
Or flow into my rivage.

When I say 'love'
You startle orange
When you say 'love'
I'm drowned in blue...
We act the same
But feel so different
The grain of sand,
Without a name,
Of white and black
Which is our land.

Ciprian Pastinica's Questions:

I would like to know if the change of pace and the relative freedom of the rhyme looks all right

Thank you,

Ciprian