Fishbowl From this side of the fishbowl I see prominent noses and rounded boxes, rocks of dust, crusts of ashes. Fishbowl, forever mother, world of weeds, and whirls of bubbles. Packed freedom in a pool of warm desires, tries to shatter the magnifying wall that, like marble, separates the cold from the living.
Paula Petrone's Questions:
Are the constructions awckward for the native reader?
¨Prominent noses¨ is too banal an image?
Correct colocation of word ¨pool¨?
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