East 77th Street, July my right cheek remembers your beloved chest in evening there so far from (here where limbs have fallen alongside pale eucalyptus trunks rasping littered with hairy bark filigree in circular float reeking smashed lawn, transplendent white walls where the ginkgo waits) not like your mouth there sex-flavored, aqueous on narrow glance a mosaic chiaroscuro in muted glow against the brown black sage warmly
Susan Allen's questions:
Does the poem set a place clearly?
Should it be more descriptive of place/smells/lighting/feelings?