Common Hue The end result of all this mess of course, being with envy green and darker hues, I find myself amongst a crowded path and clamor now to finally pay some dues. But laying down my unbound hands I find they're seemingly unwilling now to move. No matter, still I'll go ahead and plan a kingly fare for when I come and claim whatever lot I end with, not to bring a less than common color to my name. And hope the spot at which I end and lay, as origin its color not the same.
Jeffrey Fowler's questions:
Well, what I would really like to know about this poem is whether or not
the subject is clear. I know what it is talking about, obviously, but I
fear my poetic immaturity obfuscates the ideas I've tried to present.
Also, please let me know if there are any grammatical or structural
errors. I deviated from standard syntax in a few spots for effect or
integrity of the scheme- and I don't know how much of that is allowed. I don't have anyone to read my work, so this is very helpful. Thanks!