Disclosures

I wander 
Far from the normal conclusions 
Searching 
Under rocks of preconception 
Behind walls of misunderstandings 
Peeking up the skirts 
Of censorship 
Seeking a glimpse of knowledge 
Hidden 
Under petticoats voluminous 
With deception 
hoping to find 
Enlightenment 
I'm disillusioned 
With life 
And its hidden secrets 
I'm frightened 
Of death 
And its awful 
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margie sue hess's questions:

Is my message coming across?

Am i rambling or is this poem concise enough?