Source I am here without parameter where thought and wedge-tail elevate high on thermals and discipate into atmosphere where cold is a colour of glass strand fractures under foot and concern inconsequential perception of time as meaningless as the yardsticks by which the arrogance of limited existence gauge it and yet the aeons of sequential perfection which culminate in this moment are not lost, for I am here
Chris Horwood 's questions:
I live at the foothills of the Blue Mountains 75kms west of Sydney Australia. I've never worked up the courage to post a poem on a website before but offer the above for your consideration. It's a poem about a special place to where I escape when I need to regain perspective. I think it captures the feel of that place reasonably well, but don't know if it's written well enough to enable others to "feel into" the situation the way I do. Can you please offer some feedback.
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