Muscular Pain

All hearts are this, she said - quietly revealing
Mine will break yours, flexing and heaving 

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Movie, Movie!

Horror movie@midnight
goosebumpling dumpling delight

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Brother Peace (1)

6am tennis thumps darklit dawn
Muscle, ozone, sweat, jokes - all long gone

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Grandfather Dies

At four in the morning
Gone, without warning

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Otis Says Jump

In case of fire don’t use the elevator 
Use the stairs
In case of heartbreak
Neither?

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Tribute To My Mother’s Chocolate Cake 

Incredible
Edible

sirius minor's questions:

1. Do you think these qualify to be called poems, or not? Why?

2. How important is length/ duration in a poem? 

3. Do these communicate anything in terms of emotion and/or experience to you?